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Aquarius_babe
Joined: 07 Feb 2004
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Post subject: my stories on what i want to happen on the oc
Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 10:49 am
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my story on what i want to happen on the oc.chapter 1
chapter 1 second chance
Sandy:why did you do that ryan, it's the second time you got in trouble because of that boy.the school is reconsidering having you there.
Kirsten:And to be honest we are having second thoughts about letting you stay with us.
Ryan:if i'm to much trouble i'll leave.
Sandy:we aren't going to give up on you ryan. your a part of our family now.
Kirsten:Ryan what did this oliver kid tell you that got you so upset?
Ryan:i don't want to talk about it.
Sandy:well we can't help you if you dont tell us what is going on!
Ryan: i have alot of work to do i'll be in the pool house.
( ryan leaves)
Kirsten:what are we going to do about him sandy?
Sandy: there is nothing to do.but what if he's right about this kid?
(kirsten and sandy look at eachother)
Seth: have you seen ryan?
Kirsten:he's in the pool house.why?
Seth:it's a guy thing, you know dad.
(seth leaves)
Sandy: what and i'm not a guy?
kirsten: of couse,your my guy!(they start to kiss)
chapter 2
hey read these stories and tell me what you think.
chapther 2 dilemma
ryan is in the pool house lying on his bed and staring at the ceiling. he was starting to wonder if he should call marissa and get things straight. when suddenly........
Seth:hey man, what are you doing?
Ryan:nothing much just thinking.
Seth:about marissa?
(ryan looks at seth angrily)
Seth:never mind. i need to tell you something.
Ryan:okay,what is it?
Seth:it's about summer and anna. i love anna but we are more like friens then you know boy and girlfriend type.
Ryan:And...............
Seth:i'm thinking of breaking up with her tommorow.
Ryan:Really?
Seth:i want things to work out between me and summer.
Ryan:then do it!
Seth:i just don't want to hurt anna.she's a great friend.i just dont know what to do.
Ryan:dont ask me i'm not doin to well with the ladies either.
Seth:have you called marissa yet?
Ryan:no....
Seth:So,what are you waithing for man? call her tell her what's on your mind.
(ryan lookes at the phone)
Ryan:what if she doesn't what to talk to me? what will i say?
Seth: that's a risk your going to have take. anyway see you tommorow okay bud?
Ryan:ya okay!
Seth:Think about what i told you ryan!
Ryan:ya maybe i will.
chapter 3
chapter 3 the hit
Marissa is at oliver's apartment comforting him.
Marissa:here's some ice.
Oliver:thanks,you've been great.
Marissa:well it's the least i can do.i got you into this mess.but i can't believe ryan would do that.what happened?
Oliver:i went o apoligize to him about your breakup and you went crazy. sayed it was my fault for what happened between you to.
Marissa:i can't believe he would do that.let me see your eye.
Oliver:it's fine Marissa. you could leave if you want,i'll be okay on my own.
Marissa:No,i'll stay with you untill you heal. you got pretty noked up.stay i'll go get you somemore ice.
(marissa leaves leaving her purse behind her cell starts to ring,oliver lookes around and answers it)
Oliver:hello.........(nobody answers)
Marissa:i brought you some water.i thought you might be thirsty...
oliver quickly shuts off her phone and puts it back before she comes.
Oliver:thanks but you didn't have to.
Marissa:well it's the least i could do to one of my friends! oh...i forgot the ice.(marissa leaves)
Oliver:sone enough i'll be more then just a friend to you marissa.....soon enough.
chapter 4
chapter 4 questions and answers
it's morning ryan and seth are eating breakfast before school.
Seth:so.....?
Ryan:so what?
Seth:well, did you call marissa last night like i told you?
Ryan:ummm...............
Seth:did you? what happened?
Ryan:i called her cell but.................................
Seth:but what? ryan tell me.
Ryan:well.........oliver answered at leats i think it was oliver it sounded just like him. with that inisint voice.
Seth:ohhhh!
Ryan:no that me and marissa are over it's like he's her new boyfriend.
Seth:it's probably not like that ryan.
Ryan:she was with him last night not me seth.
Seth:well what did you say when he picked up?
Ryan:i hung up.........
(kirsten and sandy walk in)
Sandy:so you boys ready for another great day of school?
Seth:we can't wait!
Ryan:ya sure!
Kirsten: ryan we're sorry about yesturday night. i didn't mean what i said. you know that right?
Ryan:ya sure.
Seth:well we better get going,we don't want to be late for school.
Sandy:good luck boys!
(ryan and Seth leave)
Kirsten:uhh i have to go to work earlier today my dad wants to have a serious talk about something.
Sandy:i wonder what it could be? see you later hun(they kiss and both leave)
chapter 5
chapter 5 the fake kiss
Seth:so here we are.
Ryan:yep!it's going to seem so different now that marissa and i are over.
Seth:oh my god there's summer. But where's marissa?
(summer walks up to seth and ryan)
Summer:have you guys seen Coop?
Seth:no
Ryan:no why don't you know where she is?
Summer:i haven't seen her anywhere.marissa usually tells me when she's not coming to school.
Seth:i'm sure she's fine summer!
Summer:ya but i'm worried about her. she hardly spend enough time with me anymore.
Ryan:i know what that was like.
Anna:hey everyone!
Seth: hey anna(they kiss)
Summer:ohh anna hi. well i better get going.
Seth:bye summer..........
Anna:so i was thinkin seth that maybe we could like hang out at my place tonight.my parents are going out tonight!
Seth:wow that sound great but me and ryan already have plans tonight sorry!right ryan?
Ryan:yaaaaaaaaaaaa uhhh plans.
Anna: oh i see maybe tommorrow then.
Ryan:okay i got to get to class see you.
(ryan leaves)
Anna:what are you and ryan planning on doing tonight?
Seth:uhhh well we were planning on watching this new movie uhhhh that we rented, elf i think.
Anna:sounds good.well i guess i should get to class too. see you.
anna and seth kiss but it doesn't go to well
anna looks at sethpressing her hands against her lips.
Seth:what's wrong anna?
anna stumbles on the right words to say.
Anna:nothing
anna leaves without looking back at seth.but seth could tell something was wrong.but what?what did he do?
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Aquarius_babe
Joined: 07 Feb 2004
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Post subject: the continuation of my stories chapter 6
Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 10:58 am
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chapter 6 the first time
school had finished. seth was in his room thinking about what he did wrong. why did anna seem so upset?should he call her to finally break up once and for all? he couln't lie to her forever!
suddenly ryan walked in with a grin.
Ryan:kirsten and sandy called they said they wont be back till late. i'm going over to marissa's to straighten things up.
Seth:way to go man. is she even home?
Ryan:i hope so!
Seth:good luck.
Ryan:thanks!
ryan ran out of the house and quietly walked to marissa house.he suddenly stoped.what if she didn't want to talk to him what would he say?he froze.what should he do?
meanwhile seth still layed on his bed wondering what to do. as he was about to call anna the doorbell rang.
Seth:who canit be?
(seth opened the door and was suprised to see.....)
Seth:SUMMER!what are you doing here?
Summer:can i talk to you seth?
Seth:ya come in!
seth lead summer over to his room and the sat on his bed and began to talk
Summer:i know that your with anna but i can't get over you i've tried but i just can't.
Seth:really?i......cant get over you sum.
summer looked into seth's eyes and they began to kiss.slowly seth took of summers shirt and pants.summer began to unbutten his shirt and took of his pants.they got it on!
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CohenMTG
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Joined: 16 Jan 2004
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Post subject: Great Post!
Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 6:07 pm
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Awesome post! It could have been longer though...
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LukesGayDad
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Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 7:48 pm
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Wait! I have a few questions about Summer and Seth getting together at the end of your chapter. Question the first, does Fox show penetration? If so, will it be done tastefully? Also, I noticed that you didn't have Seth nor Summer mention anything about condoms. Protection, people, it protects! Of course, that really doesn't matter if it is a dream sequence, which I'm assuming it is, because Seth and Summer aren't even married! Pre-marital sex? That's blasphemous!
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ilovesethcohen
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
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Location: Miami, FL
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Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2004 12:00 pm
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Wow....I could actual imagine the cast acting this out... Maybe you should be the new writer on the OC! 
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xy77boy
Joined: 17 Mar 2004
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 9:49 pm
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as long as its not erotic you can post it here? waht is this, the mormon bulletin board HELLO! have you actually seen the show...geez get a life...
I think for the season finale: Julie should find out she is pregnant by Luke on the day of her wedding to Caleb, that Oliver should return and kidnap Marissa, Ryan tries to save her and ends up getting shot. Seth gets tired of Summer and breaks up with her and realizes that hes GAY!!!!!!
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PoolHouseGuy
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 10:45 pm
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Not erotic means that it isn't porn stories... i.e. no story that is a detailed, sexual story about the characters.
If you are writing a story, no problem, the characters have sex.
If you wrote a 3 page story, that was 5 lines of story, 30 lines of sex, rinse, lather, repeat, then that would be a problem.
So sex is part of the OC, and that's fine. Stories about sex that use OC characters is no fine.
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SethNRyanRmine77
Joined: 05 Apr 2004
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Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2004 2:01 am
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I like the story. Although, the way you portray Ryan could use a little work. I have been reading a lot of Fan Fiction lately about The O.C., and I think that it is really hard for people to act him out because of who he IS on the show. I don't know, it's hard to explain. But I liked the plot of your story.
~Emily~
P.S. Fewer spelling mistakes next time! I kinda got confused. 
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Summer: I'm busy, studying, naked.
Seth: Is that supposed to keep me away?
Summer: Cohen?
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ocfan123
Joined: 06 Mar 2004
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Post subject: Re: the continuation of my stories chapter 6
Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2004 3:25 pm
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welll... im not sure about the script u made because sometihng like that has already happened and its lik eu just copied it off of somewhere....  .
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ILOVEHAILEY
Joined: 24 Apr 2004
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Post subject: Jimmy and Hailey
Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2004 7:35 am
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It would be cool if Hailey makes Jimmy into some wild sexy guy!
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